Notes & Commentary: Ep. Two
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I gave AI a shot at creating show notes. Let me know what you think. But first . . . the second episode.
Breaking Down Chapter Two: Flashbacks, Symbols, and Nick's Journey
In episode two of the Monster Podcast, Marion dives into chapter two of the book, discussing the challenges of using flashbacks and dream sequences.
He elaborates on the protagonist, Nick, the cliffhanger from chapter one, and the introduction of bizarre and magical elements.
Marion explains the structure of chapter two, including Nick's accident, coma, and his new ability to see countdown timers over people's heads.
The episode also covers Nick's decision to keep this ability a secret, his process of decoding the symbols, and the overall progression of the story.
Marion emphasizes the importance of making characters relatable and believable, even when thrust into extraordinary situations.
The podcast concludes with a call for listener feedback on creating an audio version of the book and subscription options for further commentary.
00:00 Introduction to Episode Two
00:38 Guidelines for Starting a Book
01:22 Nick's Present Day and Cliffhanger
02:45 Flashback to Nick's Accident
04:14 Nick's Coma and New Abilities
11:29 Nick's Decision to Keep Secrets
14:06 Nick Decodes the Symbols
18:58 Nick Takes Action
20:55 Conclusion and Next Steps
I totally bought that Nick wouldn't tell anyone about the timers. Maybe it is because I read a lot of middle grade and kid characters often keep a secret that comes back to bite them. Also, we have already lived with Nick in the present and seen the secretive life he leads even though he doesn't seem like a fugitive. This chapter gives us a bit of an answer to why he lives that way. I like that we get that bit right away, rather than drawing it out for too long. As a reader, I find it tedious when there is a BIG SECRET that drags on and on and on.
Thank you for providing the commentary. I am a huge process nerd - I love hearing all about the creative process for anyone who creates art. So happy to subscribe to continue to hear about your process.